"Oh yeah," he told me, pulling a chair. I sat down.
"And what did she want?"
"She told me that she met Trey, and he told he that he still loves me, and wants me back." Bryan got really angry.
"The bastard! He's had enough of other women, and now he wants his precious wife back!" I looked at him,
"Bryan, she told me other things as well. She said that you and Romy had an affair in the past, that you still cheated with her when you were married. And that she saw you together last week. Oh, and that Romy is pregnant." He looked shocked.
I got up and hugged him. "I'm sorry Bryan. I love you too. But I needed to tell you this, so I would never live in doubt. And don't worry. I'm not going back to Trey. NEVER."
He took my face in his hands, and said sweetly, "I know. Don't ever let them hurt you again, Camie. And if you should see Devnee again, don't talk to her. And if Trey calls, hang up on him. They will only fill your head with hollow lies. I love you, Camie." And he kissed me so passionately, that all my doubts simply evaporated from my head.
I rang the doorbell. Bryan opened the door. He did not ask me in. Instead he walked out, and closed the door behind him.
"I thought you were at work."
"I was not feeling very well, and so I decided to take the day off," he answered.
"And you happened to call Devnee and Trey too, didn't you?"
"God, Camie, have they been lying to you again? Haven't I told you not to speak to them?"
"Well, I speak to whom I want to. You are not my father Bryan, to order me about. My father is dead, but I'm pretty sure that if he was still alive, he would kill you right now."
"What are you talking about?" he asked.
"Well, can I come in?" I asked.
"Listen, Camie, I think you should go home, I'm not feeling very well, right now."
He walked over, and sat down beside Romy. "Sit down, it's time that you knew the truth."
"No, I'm getting out," I shouted. "And I never want to see you two again."
"Sit down, Camie," he shouted back. "It will only take a few minutes of your life, but maybe you deserve to know what a bitch you have been to both of us." I was so surprised at his words, that I sat down immediately
I looked at Romy, and she saw me looking.
"Yes, Camie. This is Bryan's baby. And if you must know the truth - this is number 2."
"What? You already had another child?"
"Yes, it happened a long time ago. It's not Bryan's baby though. It happened some time after you left Simville. I started dating Noel Thompson, and after a while I discovered I was pregnant. Do you remember that time you had called me, and I had told you to move on? Well, I was already pregnant, and full of shame. You know how different things are back there." I looked at her speechless.
"But you could have told me about it. I would have tried to help you." She shook her head.
"No, you wouldn't. Not if it meant ruining your perfect existence. I married Noel, had the baby, a boy, and after a year got divorced. I decided to move out of Simville, and come to Pennsburgh."
"You were married? When you came to Pennsburgh, you were already married?" She nodded. "Why are you surprised? Am I not a Simville girl too? You too got married in your teens. Every girl in Simville does. But my marriage was not a fairy tale like yours. I needed so much help, but my only friend turned her back on me. And that was the moment that I vowed revenge on you. Trey was the sweetest revenge I could get. This story of you and Bryan was more like dessert to a rich meal." And she started laughing.
I stared at her. Suddenly I was filled with remorse. This was my childhood best friend, and she had gone through so much pain in her life, and when she needed me, I did not even try to listen to what she had to say. I simply sent her away, because I was afraid that she will drive my new friends away. And my new friends were the ones who mattered, because they were the beautiful and popular kids, and Romy was just an old friend from Simville - a town I wanted to forget. I was about to say that I was sorry for what I did to her, when she stopped laughing and said,
"I couldn't believe it when Trey fell in my trap like that. He was sooo much in love with you, that honestly I never thought I stood a chance. But I succeeded to take away your man from you, and ruin your fairy-tale life. You deserved everything that you got." I was not guilty anymore, but angry at her. I did not know of her problems, because if I did I would have helped her. I did nothing to hurt her on purpose, and I was not the one who had ruined her life. But she had ruined my life on purpose.I looked at Bryan.
"And what about you? What have I done to you?" I asked.
"Anyway, I wasn't going to give you that easy. So that night, at the party, I tried to show you how important you were for me. And I realised that you were in love with me too. That night, or rather morning, I went home as happy as could be, because I really thought that we had it made. But then you started avoiding me, and ignoring me, and made it so obvious that you were chosing Trey. So I decided that somehow or other, I was going to get my revenge on you. Well, even though I was married to Dev, I kept seeing Romy, and so we deviced a really wicked plan to ruin you both. The rest you know it."
But Bryan came around and pushed me. I fell backwards, and hit my head on the hard floor. I heard Romy screaming, and she was saying,
"Bryan, what have you done? You've really gone too far." But she sounded so far away. I tried to get up, and then I heard a familiar voice saying,
"What the hell is going on? Camie, are you alright?" But this voice sounded even further away from Romy's, as if it was a voice from a different time altogether. But as I was slowly drifting out of consciousness, I realised it was Trey's voice. Then everything went black, and I remembered no more...
So I decided to start walking along the path. After walking on for a few minutes, the path took a sudden turning, and the trees changed. Now I was walking in a road of some sort of red trees. It was all very weird
Cypress trees lined up the whole place, but there were no graves in this place. Instead there was a small fountain in the middle. I walked towards this fountain. There was a man, dressed in a white suit, sitting on the fountain's edge, and playing with the water. He did not look up, but continued playing silently. I wanted to talk to him, to ask him where I was, but instead I remained silent, waiting for him to acknowledge my presence
Suddenly as if by magic, the man disappeared. One moment he was there playing with the water, and the next he was gone. I walked over towards a bench at the far end of the garden, and looked outside. But there was no sign of him at all. I wondered if I had not imagined it all.
As I looked outside, I noticed a small river that was running at the back of the garden. I decided to go outside, to try and find a way out of this beautiful but weird place I suddenly found myself into.I started following the river, walking carefully along its edge. When suddenly I noticed that the water spelled out a name - my name - CAMIE. I was dumbfounded. Rivers just don't spell out people's names. There must be some kind of message behind all this
I followed the river, and suddenly found myself at another bench, this time a wooden one. And sitting on this bench was the same man, in the white suit. I walked over towards him, determined to speak to him this time. There was something about him, that made me feel suddenly very secure, and full of love. He looked up, and I finally understood why.
"And more days like that will follow, if you just listen to me. Trey had been foolish, but he never stopped loving you. One night at an office party, he had been seduced by Romy, and then she started threating him that if he stopped seeing her, she was going to tell you about it. He kept on seeing her, to protect you and your child from being hurt. But Trey always loved you, and he never stopped loving you. Even right now, he is in love with you, and worried sick about you." I looked up at daddy.
"So what should I do?" I asked. But I already knew the answer.
"You must give him another chance, baby. You will see that everything will turn out right this time. And in a year's time, you will have another child, a son this time." I hugged my father.
"Oh daddy, I'm so happy. I always loved Trey, and even I, I never stopped loving him. I just was too hurt and too proud to admit it, and maybe was scared too to ever give him another chance. I believed too many lies, but deep in my heart I had always hoped that the truth was different"
He then lifted me down, and to my amazement, we were standing at the edge of the path, at the exact spot where I stood when I first arrived here
"Aren't you coming with me?" I asked.
"No, baby,I can't. My time over there is up, I can't go back. But you have to go, and go on. Don't worry, we will meet again someday. I will be waiting here for you. Just keep on making me proud, like you always have. And tell your mother, that I am really happy for the man she chose as her husband. He is really worthy of a wonderful woman like her." And with those words he hugged me close. I hugged him tight, and I wouldn't let him go. But suddenly, everything went black again.
He saw me running out of the house, and getting in my car and he decided to follow me. He saw me going to Bryan's house, and he saw us arguing out there. Then when I went inside, and took a long time coming out, he decided to come over and check it out. And at that moment he heard me scream. He pushed open the door, and saw me lying unconcious on the floor.
"Where's Rykie? I asked.
"I called Devnee, and told her to go to your house so that when Rykie comes home from school, she will be there to look after her. And my mother is on her way there too."He looked at me, "Camie, can you ever ever forgive me for doing what I did to you and Rykie?" I smiled at him.
"Only if you forgive me for not believing you and Devnee."
The End
4 comments:
What a beautiful ending. I loved how you did the unconscious scenes. This was a very well written story, I didn't know who to believe. But I love the thopught of someone looking out for us....
Yes, I love to think that too...
Thank you for reading my story. I'm glad that you like it. When I first wrote this story, I used to think it was very good. Nowadays, I look back on it, and I can see many, many flaws. For one thing, there was no character building in it - they started out as superficial teens, and ended up as superficial adults lol. But as a first, this story will always have a special place in my heart, and that's why I posted it here.
Who said there was no character buuilding?? They just stayed superficial. But there was some. I know what you mean by a first story being special!!! Prelude to a Faerytale was mine!!!!
Oh my. This is one of those stories that makes you sigh with contentedness at its end. Beautiful ending to a beautiful story. I'm so happy their family got back together again. I nearly cried while Camie was in 'simHeaven' with her father. I was so afraid she was going to die. The river spelling out her name literally gave me chills. This was a fantastic read, so thoughtful and well planned. You, my dear, are an artist. I'll have to check out your other work soon. By the way, my dad's name was Jon, with dark hair and a beard, and that brought a tear to my eye.
And I agree with Chardonnay - there certainly was character building. Didn't Camie grow as a person as she grew up? Didn't she learn a lot about life, and learn to forgive? Sure, she's rich and superficial, but some people are like that, and Camie always had a little more depth than her peers, at least, I always thought so.
Sigh! Wonderful. :)
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