tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2048041454162287094.post264960793388864937..comments2011-06-10T17:03:01.641-07:00Comments on Crooked Wings Productions: Camie Stewart - Chapter 6Loriannehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01816369882038010225noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2048041454162287094.post-6434772663378891602008-01-22T16:48:00.000-08:002008-01-22T16:48:00.000-08:00Oh my. This is one of those stories that makes yo...Oh my. This is one of those stories that makes you sigh with contentedness at its end. Beautiful ending to a beautiful story. I'm so happy their family got back together again. I nearly cried while Camie was in 'simHeaven' with her father. I was so afraid she was going to die. The river spelling out her name literally gave me chills. This was a fantastic read, so thoughtful and well planned. You, my dear, are an artist. I'll have to check out your other work soon. By the way, my dad's name was Jon, with dark hair and a beard, and that brought a tear to my eye.<BR/><BR/>And I agree with Chardonnay - there certainly was character building. Didn't Camie grow as a person as she grew up? Didn't she learn a lot about life, and learn to forgive? Sure, she's rich and superficial, but some people are like that, and Camie always had a little more depth than her peers, at least, I always thought so.<BR/><BR/>Sigh! Wonderful. :)Astral Faeryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04473631993621892097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2048041454162287094.post-40917145120833516982007-11-19T04:22:00.000-08:002007-11-19T04:22:00.000-08:00Who said there was no character buuilding?? They j...Who said there was no character buuilding?? They just stayed superficial. But there was some. I know what you mean by a first story being special!!! Prelude to a Faerytale was mine!!!!chardonnayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09413200629714468681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2048041454162287094.post-86291462142867474102007-11-19T03:33:00.000-08:002007-11-19T03:33:00.000-08:00Yes, I love to think that too...Thank you for read...Yes, I love to think that too...<BR/><BR/>Thank you for reading my story. I'm glad that you like it. When I first wrote this story, I used to think it was very good. Nowadays, I look back on it, and I can see many, many flaws. For one thing, there was no character building in it - they started out as superficial teens, and ended up as superficial adults lol. But as a first, this story will always have a special place in my heart, and that's why I posted it here.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2048041454162287094.post-4201797301679710482007-11-18T08:32:00.000-08:002007-11-18T08:32:00.000-08:00What a beautiful ending. I loved how you did the u...What a beautiful ending. I loved how you did the unconscious scenes. This was a very well written story, I didn't know who to believe. But I love the thopught of someone looking out for us....chardonnayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09413200629714468681noreply@blogger.com